Re: One Last Breath: A Review

From: "Joe Earles" <jearles@BERKSHIRE.RR.COM>
To: <CREED-DISCUSS@WINDUPLIST.COM>
Date: Fri
17 May 2002 18:59:09 -0400

I can't be a screen writer. I'm over 25. =)
----- Original Message -----
From: I_love Scott_Stapp
To: jearles@BERKSHIRE.RR.COM ; CREED-DISCUSS@WINDUPLIST.COM
Sent: Friday, May 17, 2002 5:55 PM
Subject: Re: One Last Breath: A Review

Wow, Joe, I could almost just see the entire video just from your discription.  You are such a good writer, you should think about that screenwriter thing, especially if you're bored with what you do now.

Hilaree




>From: Joe Earles
>Reply-To: Joe Earles
>To: CREED-DISCUSS@WINDUPLIST.COM
>Subject: One Last Breath: A Review
>Date: Thu, 16 May 2002 18:52:24 -0400
>
>I can just see the storyboard for this one:
>
>Synopsis: Scott Stapp is having a really bad day. Wing-ed Scary Stapp Guy
>has shed his CGI motif, but unfortunately that also included his wings.
>
>Setting: A geologically unstable mountain. That drumming isn't helping the
>situation, Flip. Stop, please... PLEASE... too late!
>
>The ground is crumbling, but only beneath Stapp's feet. Message: only Scott
>Stapp has any real issues (hence the signature Brooding Messiah poses).
>Okay so now he's falling....and falling...
>...still falling and notably calm for someone about to hit the ground at
>maximum velocity. He sings as if nothing is wrong.......falling...
>
>SMASH!
>
>Now we get to meet the minor characters: Pensive George Carlin Guy, Sullen
>Clown Cher Chick, Wanda the White Witch and Heidi the Higher Chick who just
>wandered onto the set. Someone is bleeding into a chalice and I can only
>assume it's Stapp. He's had a nasty fall. Wind blows, the sky turns black,
>the apocalypse occurs with the same intensity as Y2K, Mark bangs his head
>and grits his teeth and Flip plays his drums looking like he hasn't a clue
>how he even got there in the first place. The song ends, fade to black. The
>end. Definitely better than Bullets but it made just as much sense.
>
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